Sunday, January 10, 2010

The Haunted Ship Of Captain Jack

Chapter Three:
Tommy was glad that he was made Captain by Jack, but he felt bad that he had to turn his back on Babmayus, and because Babmayus was made a prisoner now. The enemy bombed the ship that was along the side of Captain Tommy's ship. They were all crammed onto one boat. One hundred men died that night fighting with Captain Jack. Everyone on the ship except for Babmayus and his helpers cried, and grieved for Captain Jack all night long. No one killed Babmayus, but after a week he complained about Captain Jack always haunting his dreams. Everyone yelled and said "that's what you get for lying, murdering, and everyone still letting you live on Captain Jack's orders!" Tommy told Babmayus "Well you're lucky because if you had killed me, I would tell the crew to exterminate you before they got home!" But Babmayus knew that Tommy would truly never do such a thing unless he was forced to, or he would be killed. And he couldn't stop the person from forcing him to, unless he wanted to die. Tommy was really sad about the death of the Captain, but he swore "With the map I will find the treasure, and leave Babmayus and his helpers to perish for their mistakes and wrong choices."

Babmayus overheard what Tommy had said, and he decided to come up with another plan. Babmayus's plan was to: 1. Kill Tommy. 2. Keep the treasure and the ship for himself. 3. Leave the crew on the island to die. The problem was that Tommy is the Captain now, and he told the crew to: "1. Tie Babmayus to a hammock tight enough so that Babmayus can't escape. 2. Put Babmayus's helpers into the dungeon." Days and days went by, and the whole time Babmayus's helpers were always in the dungeon. And Babmayus was always tied to the hammock tight enough that he could never escape.

Chapter Four:
All the crew did their regular routines, and they took turns feeding the prisoners. Sooner or later everyone on the ship ran out of supplies, but Captain Jack always provided everyone with food and fresh water. Tommy kept his promise, and he said, "he would rather die than not keep my promise to Captain Jack." Months went by and Babmayus's helpers begged to get let out, but no one would let them out. Although Babmayus was always full of hate that he never felt bad for killing Captain Jack.

Chapter Five:
After the fifth month of being lost at sea Captain Tommy finally was able to land his ship on the island called "Treasure Island." Everyone loaded off the ship, after anchoring it. The prisoners were left on the ship for 12 hours. After under 10 hours, Captain Tommy and his crew ate then went to sleep. When they awoke, they gathered fifty treasure chests in all, and made it back to the ship. They let the prisoners out, and left them on the island to perish. Captain Jack never left the ship of ghosts alone, and haunted it the rest of his ghost life. And everyone else lived happily, with plenty of stories to tell to their families and friends.
THE END

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