Sunday, January 10, 2010

The Haunted Ship Of Captain Jack

Chapter One:
Once upon a time there was a Captain named Jack; he was trying to lead his crew to an important treasure that would make he and his mates really rich. However, he didn't know Babmayus his old friend was planning to kill him! Babmayus had accidentally told Tommy that his plan was 1. "Swith the place of Jack's self detruct C.C. [Captain's Cabin] button. 2. Blow up Jack's cabin after telling him to move, but don't give him time to. 3. After Jack is dead, lead the crew to the island as Captain, with the map. 4. When on the island, hide from the crew with the map, and go to the treasur. 5. Take the treasure to the ship, and hide it from the crew with the map inside the treasure chest. 6. When everyone's off the ship and at home, get out the treasure. 7. And go home with it so I'll be rich."

Tommy asked Babmayus, "why would you want to kill Jack? You could just make a deal with him, or get it by taking it and hiding it before anyone gets to the cave on the island. Oops, I wasn't supposed to tell you that." "Why not?" said Babmayus. "Because Jack isn't sure he should trust you, but don't tell him I told you that," said Tommy. "Captain Jack thought that you would do something terrible if you got the treasure all for yourself, became captain after him, but he won't let you get enough power to do anything troublesome." said Tommy. "I don't believe you, and I know that I am the one that is most trusted out of everyone on this ship." said Babmayus.

"I already know that Babmayus is out to get me, because he told me that he had a bad dream about killing me, but I know that he's lying." Jack said. Rumors spread around the ship like wildfire, getting fed gasoline all day long. The rumors were that Babmayus and Tommy had a plan to kill the Captain, and to keep the treasure all to themselves! Babmayus and Tommy were furious! Babmayus yelled to everyone, "I came up with an evil plan, not Tommy, and I would never team up with Tommy no matter what!" Tommy said "I would rather die than team up with Babmayus!" Suddenly everyone on the ship split into two groups. One group was with Tommy, and the other one was with Babmayus. Everyone on the ship swore "that if Babmayus really plans to kill the Captain, they wouldn't help him no matter what!" Three weeks went by, and finally all the rumors died away, just as quickly as they had started.

Chapter Two:
A week later, on a dark and stormy night, everyone was worried because they knew that they would all have to work together to avoid an attack from another ship. Nothing happened for two weeks, but no one except Babmayus knew that he had half a ship full of people ready to kill Jack! When the other ship of people found oud what Babmayus's plan was, no one would help Babmayus, because they couldn't possibly murder someone. Babmayus saw a whole ship full of people, named The Pirate That Rule The World! When they were aboard the ship, Captain Jack yelled, "everyone who wants to protect me, get around me now!" Half of everyone on the ship made a circle around him, but the other half attacked their enemies. Suddenly, Babmayus shouted, "Jack and mates, watch out! Were going to blow the C.C. to destroy our enemy!" But it was too late. Jack hadn't moved in time, and Babmayus pushed the button to blow up the C.C.! As Captain Jack flew to the other side of the ship, he shouted, "you will pay for this Babmayus!"

Jack landed next to Tommy, and he madly said "Tommy bring our crew to the treasure, and I'll take care of Babmayus and his helpers!" Suddenly everyone on the ship started yelling "Fight, Fight, Fight!" Babmayus and Tommy started sword fighting. Tommy trapped Babmayus in the corner and wounded him badly and then left.
TO BE CONINUED.......

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